That's exactly what I felt about my friends too. We can read each others' minds. =)

"We'll be friends until the end,
In my heart, I'm always with you,
My happiness I'll gladly lend,
You will always be my friend true."

You see, this last stanza seems a bit forced.

"You will always be my friend true."

Especially this line. Maybe you can try:

"We'll be friends until the end,
In my heart, I'm always with you,
My happiness I'll gladly lend,
Just to see you smile too."

Haha, I'm just brain storming, sorry if I didn't help at all. =)

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

There were a few awkward sentances, but otherwise, amazing poem. it was so sweet

I don't often enjoy rhyming poetry; however, your poems are like a new breath of air. So many people on this site, despite their good intentions, bring to us so many poems that lack talent and feeling. I've read several of your poems, all of which were worth 5 points.

Keep writing, you're an important aspect to this site...bring us more of your talent!

Christa

Hey, that's such a sweet beauty!
Yes, true friends rock. And the good thing is that you only need one!
Take care.

Good Writing!
beth

Wow, this poem was very beautifully written and so true.
I enjoyed reading it.
much love,
marjan

Wow wow wow you are a very talented person really
5/5