Comments : Heres a poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Wonderfully Done:) (btw happy belated bday) this is the first of your poetry ive read and its pulled me in awesome:) keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Wow, this was great, the poem was talking to the person.
    I really enjoyed it you got your point across!
    Great poem , the flow was wel and it was wel put together!

  • 18 years ago

    by The heart the soul the love

    Hey babe well it's me and well i LOVE poem and am thankful that your in my life and you think so highly of me i love ever part of you i love you babe just to let you know i think about you ever day every mintue every second is filled with thoughts of you i love you
    cya from you love mya

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    This is the best I've seen from you...really sweet...what a beautiful piece...your poems make me go speechless.

  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    Thats a VERY sweet poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by lostlllsoul

    Awesome poem u have.. your girl is so lucky and im sure she'll cherish it forever.. k keep writting!!

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    0hh great j0b 0n this p0em. beautifully written. well d0ne! keep it up
    l0tz 0f l0ve / d0ra

  • 18 years ago

    by Rosie

    I love it.....so much honesty. keep up the good work ^_^ Rosie xXx

  • Great poem 5/5.. I like how each stanaz has a meaning of it's own... Great Job... keep it up...
    -Sarah-

  • 18 years ago

    by Shandra

    Thats a great poem it made me think of what my man thinks of me!!(he's told me) I'd love to have a guy that writes me poems lucky girl

  • 18 years ago

    by Nikki

    I loved this poem it was soooo sweet 5/5 of course. loved it and keep it real!!!!!!!