God damn, that is a really amazing, brilliantly written song. You are so talented. 5/5 easily x

Mate, this was truly an excellent song! It was full of emotion, and excellent wording and structure. The chorus is absolutely lovely and the imagery contained within is very original. Excellent poem, or song! Very well done indeed.

Wow that was incredible, it really was. what an excellent piece! keep it up 5/5 xxx

Dang !!
That would make a brilliant song .......

The emotion in the wording is meaningful ...
I hope to see it in the greatest hits sometime soon ...
Brilliant poem~song....either way beautifully brilliant ...
It seems that I have a new poet that has captivated my attention ...
Incredible talent ....

What kind of music would you put lyrics like this to? And do you have music for this?.. I would like to know what it sounds like. Anyawys, awesome stuff

Excellent another song i love it your such a great writer