This is beautiful. So well written. Moments like the one you describe are so precious. Keep them in your heart for those times when you are apart. I am always impressed with your writing, but this one is over the top.

A beautiful piece. Moments like these are a treasure and ones we'll cherish forever. Well written...

Love Ann*

Oh, my! You really set the tone in this, it's so magical and romantic! I especially like the next to last stanza, beautifully conveyed! The entire piece is so mesmerizing and passionate! Well done~Holly

Wonderful... such a special memory to be able to have. you wrote it out well
~neens~