Comments : A Nothing, A No-One, A Wasted Space

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Wow...that's so true...so you wish you could just stop it but it's such an addiction. hun i like this poem, it actually flowed pretty well!!
    take care xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Timothy B

    No one is a waste of space. Maybe now it looks that way, but you'll find your place.

    Tim

  • Its good.

  • 18 years ago

    by nightschild

    Im so proud of u tessy,
    well done

  • 18 years ago

    by Tess

    Thanks Mary! I am proud of you too! You are my rock! :P xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Liz

    There is alot of emotion and force in this one. You must have realy gotten into it when you were writeing it.
    Love Liz

  • 18 years ago

    by Marissa

    Thanks for the comment and WOW! I have felt like this so much. It's nice to know that other people feel the way I do. I hope that everything turns out right for you!!

  • 18 years ago

    by JessicaaSlater

    Grreat idea behind the poem and i love the end -- "What have I achieved?

    Just more problems and reasons for me to hate myself" it was a great conclusion!... the flow wasn't as much there as in your other poems, so you could've made that a bit better. but other then that. Grreat job! 4/5