Great poem! My favorite lines were:
My life is curling,
unfurling, and dropping away;
They really stood out to me. But this is a great poem. 5/5**

Such strength in the ending. Leaves me with a felling of marching forth ...

Wow. That was profound. So much relevance. I feel that like, practically everyday but did not know how to get it into words. I love it.
Take Care

Wow this poems reminds me of my movinvg which unfortunately is coming soon, i love the way you rhymed without it being overbearing and it still flowed through the poem well. great job. 5/5

lots of love
*~*Becky*~*

Well maybe I'm faded,
jaded, and torn today,
but I'll be back;
when I'm back,
I'll be here to stay.
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I liked those lines so much! I can relate to them kind of. The poem was a little short, But it was good. But those lines really brought it all together. It was a great strong ending. Awesome job!! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.