Hey I liked this poem you wrote. it was really good. I liked the part where it says "but..." and then from there on, cause it just gives it a special twist. anyway, thanks for the comment on my poem. really appriciated it. 5/5

That is such a sad poem it really brought tears to my eyes. It just seems like that is what me and my boyfriend are going through right now. God this sucks. But keep up the good work. I will be looking forward to reading them because I can at least relate to this one. If you write anymore like this please email me them at BrokenBabe0227@yahoo.com Thankyou

Aww very sad hun!
loved the ending...