I know this feeling all too well. Great job explaining the determination even on a subject so gloomy and controversial.

--Sher

Great poem! i love the last two lines, really dark i just got done reading a book kind of like this! i was like hey cool lol. a job well done!

~Jacklyn

They way you wrote this poem, it paints a beautifully dark picture in my imagination. You did a wonderful job, I'm looiking forward to reading more from you. 5/5
Carly

Thx for commention on my poem, I can relate to this tho

Wow, really nice, deep and powerful i liked it alot.

xxx cici xxx

Great poem 5/5.
its so dark and true.dangerous mix and i love.g2g L8ter,

Corie>:-x

Good wording n it had a gd flow 2 it as wel, it duznt sound sin songey bt duznt sound like crud eitha so gd job all round.

good work. keep goin.

xXx

What an excellent poem!
your such a good writer.
such a sad poem but i can turlly empathise
5/5
xoxox