Wow... you never cease to amaze me... absolutely beautiful!!! glad to see you're posting again. keep it up! take care and stay strong.
-xXx-

I love this, its the first of your work Ive read but its great, I look forward to reading more, I love this site:)

Jenn

Wow.. that was so gud.. deep n dark kinda.. i lykd ur last stanza.. ur poem flowed well, and ur emotions wer expressed very well.. gr8 job.. well done!!
welcome bak sweetie
Nannoush

Liked it much. that was so gr8! keep up the gr8 work!!!
~*Who Cares?*~

Yes, it had a simple type of beauty in its darkness, and a unique bitterness...

Great poem, I really loved it although its pretty sad.
5/5
love anna