Comments : Open Wounds And Clinging Hearts.

  • 18 years ago

    by Renee

    "A smile comes but it must be denied,
    Never can I stand, so I must fall."

    -why- do you deny happiness? I mean if it's happening naturally, why would you want to push it away? I don't know, I don't really understand that, but I think everyone does that...maybe because sadness is a comfort zone, or maybe they're just too afraid of what comes with happiness. I think the poem was amazing Sarah, the idea and thought process put into it shows that you obviously feel strongly for this boy, but you just can't let him know. Great job. and I'm sorry, for anything and everything.

    Take care,
    Renee