Great work matt, it isn't repetitive as u say. however, 'eternity alone'?....
i think not...

Amazing work!!! reminds me of "The Lottery" by Shirley Jackson... awesome write! you're very talented. keep it up!
-xXx-

Great job dude, the more recent i read, the better they are. 5/5

A little bumpy for flow now and then but I liked it. Cool ending. Very nice work.
~Faith

It is true that the more recent they are they're better
Excellent poem great job
Em