The first stanza really amde me smile and the second made me smile and think great job 5/5

lots of love
☼Becky☼

Hey joey, I loved this poem. you're really talented. the beginning and ending was very good too.
much love,
marjan

Hmm...you know...I don't really understand poems about nature...I have to read this three times to totally understand it...it's not that you are not good...it's me that is too dumb...lol...very nice...it rhymes very well...and you can actually sing it...do you know that? I really like it...