Comments : Seeping Reasons And Fading Hopes.

  • 18 years ago

    by Renee

    I don't know what to say, it seems like you took this right out of my head. I really am speechless. I think the only thing that kinda had me wondering about was the significance of you capitalizing She and Her? I dunno if theres some kind of inference or what. But I love this poem. it's not like one of those "I hate you for breaking my heart" poems, it's more along the lines of the inevitable and there's no hard feelings, I mean it's not her fault that her feelings changed, right? well I dunno. but it was a very well written poem.

    Take Care,
    Renee

  • 18 years ago

    by **Just Her**

    Holy!! this was amazing, i dont know if i fully understood everything, but thats what i loved about it, that'll theres something to figure out and i'll go back and read it again just to see what I missed. Great flow, great, great work.