Comments : Dreaming of You

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    When I dream of you
    I see your stunning dark hair
    Your hair display the emotions unsaid
    And show the world who you really are

    When I dream of you
    I stare into your mysterious eyes
    That the world tried to hide
    Yet glow against you vibrant face

    When I dream of you
    I’m shown the black that you wear
    that seems to be the best disguise
    As you fade into the darkness

    I dream of the songs that you sing
    wondering what they really mean
    All through the day your on my mind
    and as I sleep Its of you I dream!!!

    If you expand it give it more meaining and passion ... i dont know this person so i cant really help but above is my rand input to get you started if you feel like exploring:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    AWWWWWW *HUGS* Ive never been someones hero before, you just made my day! thankyou I'm here when ever you need so help and gudience just give me a shout:) and you might wonna check for typos:P but awseome hunn

    Love yeh
    jenn

  • 18 years ago

    by Jay-Jammal

    Wow...great poem i really love this one very much and it's really touched mi heart u knw for somehow...lol...but keepdoing it okay-Jammal