Great poem... A rictometer sounds like fun =)
This poem shows honesty, no cheesy corny love quotes mingled into a single poem but a simple, yet very effective true love expression. I liked it ;)

SiE

You can do better than this -- I know, I've read your other poems

Great work

pili

I find this to have a good aspect on love.

I really liked this poem, somthing in it really captured me. it makes me picture a newly married cople. dont know if thats what you were going for, just my opinions.

It is so cute. I loved it. Isn't it funny how when you get older you seem to say "I love you and don't forget to pick up something on your way home" I can't wait until I get married and do the same thing. But it was adorable.

This is a really cute poem, Sounds like a movie moment. Very nice
xoxo
allison

You explained it very well...and it did have a little humor involved in it....very intersting poem to read...