I like this poem, it has a great message for all of us. It's also well written. 5/5

Hey-lo! Remember Me? I Just thought I'd repay your kindness by reading some of your poetry... Awesomeness!!! lol ^.^ I added you to my Fav's. Well done!

Gr8 poem...totally agree...gr8 messge...keep up the gr8 work! 5/5!
~*Who Cares?*~

This was probably my favorite poem of yours out of the ones i have read i don't really get why you stopped rhyming for the last 3 stanzas maybe it's just me but this definatly i dont think was a free verse poem so it should all rhyme or it all shouldnt ya know? i dunno i could be wrong lol but yeah i really liked this i love your point of veiw it's very positive

Things move so fast,
Before your eyes,
That people take life for granted,
The life in their heart dies

that was my favorite part great job 5/5