Wow....Ur poem was beautiful! It made me think about my life and other people's problems, and how suicide isn't really the way to solve it, but its ok...I htink that your poem was awesome...Truely gifted girl..keep it up iight?

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That was really good. Like the message behind it all, suicide isn't the way to solve your problems. More ppl care bout u then you can ever know and its not nice to repay their kindness by leaving them w/out so much as a last goodbye. Keep it up

You are talented and have a gift of storytelling...continue to write.

THIS WAS REALLY GOOD IT`S AMAZING HOW YOU COME UP WITH STORIES KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK

Wow!! you have agreat talent..you really do have a great way of expressin stuff. i likes this a lot

urs may not be based on a true story. but a boy in my school that i knew commited suicide with a gun just last week. we live in a small town and everyone was affected by it. this is a very touchy subject and although you wrote about it i dont think you caught the true feeling of what its like to want to die, if u havent felt it then u cant explain it! believe me i would know...
but it was still well written! good job....

You are great at writing so don't ever stop. luv jess

Your poem was well written, but I have to agree with Amy that you didn't really get the emotion behind the victim. Yes, they should think about what they're doing to other people, but you also have to see what they think and feel and what they have to live with everyday. Anyways, great writing though!

Very good... especially not being through the situation... i think it takes a lot to be able to pull a poem together when referring to something you haven't delt with first hand...

Very good... especially not being through the situation... i think it takes a lot to be able to pull a poem together when referring to something you haven't delt with first hand...

comment on my work to plz thanks
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