W0w
that was a great poem
i loved the story flow
i read ur other poems and ur definately in my favs
5/5 surely
i wish i could write like u
anyways if u could.. pls check out my poems and tell me what u think..
thanx

Really really good. 5/5. check out mine if u have a chance.

So great and soo sad! I loved it!
xoxo

Nicley written