Hurry up and write part 2 I wanna know what happens next

God you gotta write more. this was excellent. i cant wait to see more. 5/5

Omg that was good..u have to do a part 2 hahaha 5/5

Mmm sounds like fun..i want to hear more.

Thats hell! turnd me on! write another one

I'm wet... What else you want me to say!!!!!!!... Goin to read part 2 now

Haha oh wow!! i really like it and i would love to see the next part to this poem!! great job! xoxo

Rite another. i beg u!

Seriosuly hope ya finish that lol.

Hell yea countune it. that was so hotttttt. i got images rollin around in my head. awesome job. keep writing.

lots of love
hayley