Well nice of u to add a translation:p if i knew spanish id probably appreciate it more but i still thought the poem was great:P
thanks for your comments:)

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Michelle

Oh my god...i love love love this poem...keep up the great work is all i have to say...u r a very honest poet and u write what u feel and thats what i love most about it 5/5

Ola j well u said that' it was funny but u are so wrong... this isn' t funny it is very nice actually i mean u gave it ur all in a totally different languague and to me is really nice i did understand what ur trying to write.... i give u props for it ... any work that anyones does is not a joke is a piece of art to u and to sum people...keep it up is very nice and if u ever want to learn more spanish just look me up and write to me i'll teach u okay nice job....