Comments : Autumn's Hand

  • 18 years ago

    by Z

    Favorite stanza:
    Look at what the Autumn has done,
    To grass once scorched by Summer's sun:
    Autumn has painted it green again,
    And revived it with all it's rain.

    Awesome work! A lot of excellent rhymes.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jaime

    I don't like when summer ends, but when you put it that way...... I guess it isn't so bad. You seem to be very good at capturing the beauty's of different seasons, and finding words to express them with. Too bad 5 is the highest I can rate it.
    ~Jaime

  • 17 years ago

    by ModernDavinci

    Mmm. I really enjoyed this. Alot. Yeah, this is poetry. This is. I love it.