Comments : You Can Be Different Too

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    It's so true, I totally agree. People should be different, be themselves not somebody else. Great Job! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    Lovely work...
    nice style
    its different...like u !!!
    loved reading this
    thanks for the 100th vote...as a favour i'd vote all ur poems 5/5 for u
    infact this one also get 5/5
    if u find time do read more of my stuff...
    love
    amy

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    This is good i think you kinda a little bit got your ideas mixed up though

    I love you,
    But them,
    They're different,

    there you're saying being different is a bad thing

    But that's them,
    I'm different,
    So why can't you be too?

    there you're saying being different is a good thing, so i dont know exactly what you meant to say but i think you just worded it wrong or i'm reading it wrong i dunno anyways besides that cause i think i get the point of this poem anyways the first 6 lines were my favorites i think you worded them very well it was a very interesting poem so 5/5 i liked this good job