Hey babe...really gd poem....is this how u feel? or did u write it bout sum1?neways i hope u feel better! keep shining!xoxoxoxjosie.....

Great poem...your feelings show in your words..i like it alooooot..keep it up (u r great )..
ramy medhat

Ur not bad =D
its good stuff
just remember u dont always have to rhyme.
cuz everyone rhymes
try to be different