Aww hun, mega sweet and a great write as always. 5/5 - I'm off to read the other one now.
Emmi xx

Good poem, it was really cute, 5/5, take care,

*~Jen~*

Wow..beautiful...

Hold me in your arms,
Until I fall to sleep,
Cause when i lie without you baby,
I can't help but weep,

This first verse really set the scene and was so perfect in its own right. I love the imagery, its flawless...this poem really struck a chord with me.

I want to take your pain away so much, if only i could give u a real hug instead of these crappy cyber ones!! *hugs*

Thinking of you xx

Its amazing yet again. very sweet and almost peaceful. love it, love em all.

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