Omg this poem is awesome. It's sooo sad *hugsies*. Love the first stanza.
Emmi xx

That is an excellent poem, i love the images you used to describe how you feel, i particularly like this stanza:

I miss you like a mouth with no tongue,
It cannot speak, all these words left unsung,
They just hang in the moment, caught up in the mind,
Words left unspoken and all left behind,

It was really sad, but really really good, well done, take care,

*~Jen~*

Another brilliant poem! I had to read it a few times cos of the rhythm being irregular, but i actually dont think you should change that because it really helps to portray your emotions, especially the last three stanzas which are shorter. Its brilliant El xxx *hugs tightly*

Youre writings got een better hun. so original

They just hang in the moment, caught up in the mind,
Words left unspoken and all left behind,

i love these lines, and its finished perectly.

5/5, no question -x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-

This poem is awesome. i have nothing negative to say. i love the simile's and metaphors.