This is something i would write but i don't really like to write sad poems it somehow really brings me down...but i think it suits you...keep up the great work...5/5 u deserved it...keep in touch

OMG! That's an amazing poem! I feel like that a lot of the time too, so if you ever wanna talk, I'm here for you. The poem was amazing.. so full of emotion! Amazing job! Keep up the great work!

~BJ~

Although i do not know wat ardor means, i still luvd the poem. u have an excellent gift. u write poems very well. 5/5!
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