Awww soooo sweet !!
I liked this alot, it's beautifully written.
5/5

xxx cici xxx

The last sentance of the second stanza made no sense; how does a mountain scape tie into this poem? you should explain it better if you are going to add it in.

This poem flow pretty flawless.

"For now I will have to wait,
To be with you once more,
Let's not leave it up to fate,
For it's you that I adore."

I was expecting a powerful ending and you haven't let me down. I would put you on my favourite's list, but you are already there.

This stanza is my favourite, especially the third line.

( )_( )
(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

Aw.. this was written soo well i love it .. great job keep it up

Wow very well written i liked it so much 5/5