This is a interesting poem, i liked.

I love that ending. It's so true. It makes people think. Great job. 5/5

Beautiful!!! 5/5

Lol, this ones great too!

You a really good poetry writer. I love how you make the words flow into each other. Great Job!!

This poem is very touching and I felt every single word you said ;), You express all your feelings really well, great job ;).

Nice! I like ur poem very much so. I can't exactly relate, but i do love it. how i long to be like that sometimes, yet i think it would be really painful...

Aw this is so sad...but i have to admit i feel this way a lot of the time so i can definitely relate 5/5 keep it up

This is really deep, I love it :]
Shows a lot of emotion, and powerful feelings. You made it seem like I was going through those feelings, which can be really hard to do most times.