I love the ending. Great Job! You're a talented writer.

Geez. so good! seriously EVERYTHING u write is good..that is so awsome!!!! wow...5/5 4 sure!

Great job once again....i cant wait to read more of ur poems...i enjoy reading them....wel hope to talk to u later
~Sierra~

~*WoW! ur a really good writer 5++ well keep it up great work*~ XoXo