Wow i really liked this. I loved the idea of cupid. I didnt see any errors through the poem though...take care hun xoxo

Very very nice.
It's an original idea, i liked the concept and you wrote it well.
I think you should write some more dark poems !!!!

XxX Cici XxX

Wow
nice one!!!!
girl u should write more dark poems=D
This one turned out so well..
i like the idea.. very original adn unique.. i'd love to see more dark poems frome u=)
5/5

Nice poem.I like the words that are in it.Very satisfying to read.And I don't even really read these.I really like the lines

"Or are you just a harmless creature,
Who is too blind to even aim correctly"

I loved that im not very good at writing dark poems (well i dont think ive even writen one or have I??) but i loved it thanx!!!!

Wow!!! i must say that is a fabulous poem!!! thnx 4 commenting my stuff! wow ur good. if this is only a 1st id luv 2 c a 2nd ull have 2 let me kno wen u make more! anyway 5/5 4 sure!!!

~*Who Cares?*~

We are brought here by birth,
But we will leave here by death.

That's weird...I thought we leave with what we came from...

you leave with what you came with, nothing. you were born into this world with nothing and likewise you will leave with nothing.

Very good. Good for a dark poem and good choice of words. Reading your poems has helped me write some of mine. Good poem and would like to rate it but the computer is missed up. Keep writing more poems..:)

Hey Jane, that was really good, Its hard to believe it was your 1st dark poem, it was really good! My favorite part was the 1st part...
Who are you my dear friend cupid?
Why are you so cruel and heartless?
Or are you just a harmless creature,
Who is too blind to even aim correctly.

That is cool as.

Keep writing, i really enjoy your stuff.
Daniel

Woah!! you can really write dark poems... really morbid! keep makin more dark poems.....

Wow I loved this poem.. and I am VERY glad that you dont cut urself.. u should be very proud of that fact.. but a dark one about cupid.. thats something I've never read before and you did I very good job at it. Nice work.

Jus wanted to say thanks for the comment and return one. i liked your poem, been like that couple times myself.

Very nice.
i agree on the cutting wrists subject...

It may be ur first try at a dark poem but its awesome5/5

I wonder about love sometimes too.