Great poem and amazingly well written. It strikes me all that much harder after recent events but it is still a fantastic work of art.

Babe dats awsum
nice imagry aswell, worked well 4 ya
luv ya heaps
amy

Clearly you're not only brilliant with verses, but a song writer too :)

Fist of all let me congradulate you on another beautiful work of art . Besides two mistakes that I seen ( such as when you say capturing its time in the hour glass sands . It should be just sand, and when you say, the hands keeping moving through the faces . It should be , keep moving through the faces . ) Other then those simple mistakes that a lot of artist make, I have no choice but to say excellent, bravo, and wonderful . Because to me it was all those things and more . 5/5

you're friend

Letty