Comments : LMAO

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    It dont rhyme or click

  • 18 years ago

    by kyky

    Pfft who cares what she finks lol i liked it my fav part was....
    Friends can love
    truly and honestly.
    Friends need friends
    because love can be scary.

  • 18 years ago

    by [She.Falls.Asleep]

    My fave bit was :
    Friends first now
    I am certain.
    Friends last now
    I know.

    That poem was really good and it really got me thinking about feelings and other stuff in my life with guys and friends e.t.c. I always think a good poem is one that sticks with you even after you've finished reading it, and this one did. :). I liked it a lot.

    Take Care, Elle x

  • 18 years ago

    by cLumsy

    Haha... it doesn't NEED to rhyme to be poetry. HA! anyways, good job! and thanks for the hecka lot of comments you put on my poems! please write more. 5/5 ;)

  • 18 years ago

    by яock godеѕѕ

    WoW... good job!! Thank-you for the comment it means alot.. Mwa nat XoX

  • 17 years ago

    by Bri

    The last stanza is my favorite. Pulls the poem all together and leaves room for interpretation from the reader. I have to give credit where credit is do, and I absolutely adore this poem just like all your other work. Very smart and creative play off of LMAO by the way. =)

  • 17 years ago

    by Ana

    Powerful. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by damaged rose

    My fav part is same as kyky;

    Friends can love
    truly and honestly.
    Friends need friends
    because love can be scary.

    Good job. very touching stanza though the poem is excellent. it was wonderfully amazing. keep writing. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    I like this. Laughter is indeed one of the best beginnings of a relationship, I suppose. It's a delightful read, thanks for sharing. =]

  • 16 years ago

    by silvershoes

    What a sweet poem. I especially appreciated this stanza:
    What do you call prelove?
    How do you describe the feeling?
    Is it real friendship
    or does it have another name?

    I think many people have thought about this pre-love, but have never put it down in words. So thanks.

    Also, thank you for all of your comments on my poetry.

    5/5