Comments : Wont bring you back

  • 18 years ago

    by No1ButMe

    Hey, this wasn't one of your best poems but it was still really good. It had a really strong ending that totally captured me. The middle gets a lil confusing but I think it wraps it up nicely at the end. Well keep up the good work. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Roulin

    Hey Black, Its pretty good, I agree with the other person you've written better but haven't we all?

    Luv Scarlet xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by katie!

    I love you, so sorry I am not back quicker than I thought I would be, I hate the fact i am still away, I love you, with all my heart and soul

  • 18 years ago

    by Graham

    Why was I such a knob?

  • 17 years ago

    by lana

    I liked it
    it was great
    keep wrighting you are a great writer and keep up all your hard work

    never stop wrightin

    from lana