Wow, it's really interesting to read these, i've never read any poems about actually being in the war so this is really neat to hear, cause you must have been through a lot, so thanks for sharing. this idea is amazing 5/5

"I bare it myself"...bare should be bear.

Anyway...good poem. I liked it, very strong. Makes you think about how war is such a discrepancy....people kill for the good of their country, for their men...we're both doing the same thing....protecting ourselves, but hurting ourselves. Good job bringing out such strong emotions.

Lucy Loves Not

I really liked this poem! It was beatifully written. At first, I was kind of confused as to what you were relating this to, but throughout the poem, it was easy to comprehend. Great job, I really really liked it. I could feel the emotion behind it and it was sensational! Great job and keep up the lovely work!

~BJ~