This was an amazing and heartfelt poem. And I admire you, for the job that you are doing, and all the things you put on the line to fight for our country. I could never have to courage that you have to leave the one you love for 9 months to serve your country. You did a great job with this poem, it shows a lot of emotion. Keep up the good work.

Take Care,
Renee

This is great. why didn't you ever call her when you were there?
I called you, it had been 9 months
ecstatic you sounded to hear my voice.
how do you feel i asked your heart.
I love you so much, but we cant restart.
our love is here our lives are not.

that was my favorite part, your a really great writer im excited to read your next poem now!

OMG, That was such a sad poem! It was beautifully written! I also wonder why you didn't keep in touch with her... why not even a letter? Anyway, that's just my silly curiosity... Great poem! You have a lot of talent and you are a gifted writer, keep it up!

~BJ~