Awwww I'm sowwie.

Wow sweetie that was realy good. I'm sorry that you are going through this but trust me this won't be your last heartbreak. You will find someone who actually cares about you. It may take time but you will. Everyone has a soulmate and you just haven't found yours yet. But keep looking. You will. Great poem by the way. Keep writing.

OMG that was so...cute ur good at this kinda stuff i really liked that keep up tha good work...

Very nice and touching poem !

xxx

I think this has the potential to be a very fine poem. But it needs some work to correct the spelling and language errors. I think it might be helpful for you to compose your poems in a word processor such as MS Word so that you get the benefit of the excellent spell checker that is included in that software.

Sorry, I don't mean to be harsh. I'm really trying to be helpful.