Great poem. i loved the wording. one thing is though is that it didnt feel finished. just my opinion. 5/5

O bee..... = ( you make me so sad....

I loved teh first verse!:
we'll never get along
that's how it has to be
you keep to yourself
ans i'll keep to me
it so much like what i went through when i first broke up with my ex! great poem! i really like it
luv courtie

Again i love it! its sad........*Sniffle*
hope you can come to the movies w/me 2morow!