This is a really moving poem, i really liked the last verse,

so in this night this young girl died
and the pain she left behind still cries
So goodbye to the world as she goes to sleep
and now no longer will her depressed heart weep

amazing poem.

good work, keep goin.

xXx

Excellent! just excellent! you're a very good poet ad i cant wait to read more... this is a very sad, yet good poem...and it just shos what people rae throwing away when they commit suicide...eventhough they don't mean to...love it