Structurally uninteresting. Nice try to write poetry though... I think. You could do much better, u have the ideas man!!!!!! I wont vote this time, but next time I will give what u truly deserve, hey? U have the ideas, just the poem is very weak, u didnt put much effort, i can tell.

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