Comments : Losing something i never had

  • 18 years ago

    by Daniel J

    I dream of you every night,
    i guess you never did the same.
    ....
    Then my heart realized,
    what my mind knew for awhile.

    As you can see, I started collecting my favourite lines. It quickly became a task in futility, for I would have to reproduce half the poem here!

    Brilliance! 5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by Z

    I can relate....nothing really to say except like you concluded in the end, all you can do is move on and put it in the past.

  • 17 years ago

    by MzImperfectshun

    BEAUTIFUL POEM! LOVE IT OH SO VERY MUCH. :)

    5/5