Comments : Could never be perfect...

  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Great poem, really well written, 5/5! take care xxxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Domino0792

    How can i hold on anymore,
    when there is nothing to hold on to.
    You tell me not to give up,
    but what else is there to do.

    Great first stanza. Most things i pen about are mostly bout a love gone wrong and an escape is used which is usually cutting. No body understands that side of things, we are alone. So those who do understand, who have experienced it, must stand together and support each other. I am here to support you if needed.