Very well expressed. Thanks for sharing. Is this poem wrote to specifically, a parent that was in war? My father was in Vietnam. Thanks again for sharing.

Michelle

=O omg....such a touching poem. we would all love to ask those very questions to those who risk their lives for us. just...wow..Rosie xXx

The greatest poem ever

Wow great poem it makes u think lol great job keep it up xoxo laura

Great poem :)

Your really good u will go far in life

Good

Wow, this is very powerful. it reminds me of some1 i kno who went over seas during the war, he came back and had a baby from his wife. i really like readin ur stuff