Comments : Twists and turns

  • 18 years ago

    by bex

    This one is quite delicate in itself
    it's givng off like some sort of tension like when you are trying to tiptoe around it's silent && tension grows
    like the use of words `despondency` ooo lol

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    I love this one... i don'y know how u do it hunny... wow... love u ... and sorry for hitting u just now heehee but u shouldn't look... AND U STILL ARE damn u ... but i love the poem though hunny... mwah xxxx. xxxx. xxxx. xxxx.