This is a wonderful poem...really emotional. but suicide is NOT the answer. hell is gonna be worse, right? and i swear that life WILL get better! just hang in there. please, trust me, life will get better...you just have to stay strong, then sooner or later people will begin to notice you, you'll ge thappier, and you'll think "thank God i'm alive."
but aside from that, the poem was really great. a wonderful write.
cheers

Ah ah ah ahhhh!
soo i was majorly about to cry...
it is a "good" meaning behind it
((well good as in good it was good but not good because it isn't good, tehe if that makes any sense))

but nicely done

<3 whitney

Hahahah Thanks :) Yeah that was from my "dark" days back when I was sixteen, now eightteen my world is lighter now, if your life is down, just look up and know oneday you'll feel alive again :)

"Look closely.
Life isn't what it seems, sometimes.
Act lonely, and just hope one day you'll feel alive."

Great poem! not good you went through that but..the poem is amazing
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