Comments : I can't

  • 18 years ago

    by Virginia

    I love it. Captures the reader nicely. really lets emotions show.
    comment me?
    Virginia

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah

    Feeling the same,
    if this is what you really feel, hang in there like I am..
    email me:
    happyfalcon19@hotmail.com

  • 18 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow BJ, very emotion filled poem. I loved it. Remember I am always here if you ever want to talk.

    Love
    ~ItailanStallion A.K.A. Joe~

  • 18 years ago

    by TheDevilHimself

    Hi bj, that was gud, its little like how i feel now. take care. Hugz u

  • 18 years ago

    by Rolo

    Wow, I wouldn't have guessed that something like this would come from you. But then again you should never judge someone if you don't know them very well. It was very emotional. It expressed a lot to the reader...and I'm sure a lot of people can relate. I know I can. Anyhow you got your point across and I liked it. Nice job. I hope things change soon and that in time you won't feel this way. Take care.

    ~rolo

  • 18 years ago

    by RadianceInReverse

    I liked it alot...keep up the emotional writing i love it!!! Plz comment on my poems and i will continue commenting on yours..thanx...Joclyn

  • Wow !!!
    I loved this... it's incredibly powerful, the words mean so much and this is full of emotion.
    I especially liked the way you've finished it. It had a completely different effect than the rest of the poem.... it really stood out (if you dont know what i mean, i do, im sorry !!)

    Thanks for your comment, i really appreciate it.

    xxx cici xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by im ur AdDiCtiOn

    That poem is really good... i know how you feel too.. thank you for my comment and i hope neil doenst do anything to many poepl love him and with your poem if you ever need someone to talk to you no where to talk to me
    ~a.f.u~

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    I remember when i felt like that too....

    its a great poem and captures it prefectly

  • 18 years ago

    by Lindsay C

    Wow..very sad! very good poem tho!

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    Wow...this one is amazing, I feel your pain, I understand your fear...Keep writting... your amzing... thanks for the comments on Love Always...

    Kayla
    XOXO