You repeated the same word over many times, I think you should chose different words to fully express yourself.

The lsat line was the perfect ending though.

I absolutely heart the idea to this poem.

Well done.

( )_( )
(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

I dont think it's poorly written at all! the rhyming could do with a look since it interupts the flow every now and then, but over all a very good peice.

Nicely done, emotion was there so it made the feel of the position worth the read! great flow too! 5/5

To me this poem is very good and not at all poorly written...keep up the great job and i'm pretty sure that with your poetry you will go far...5/5 u really and truly deserved it...

Super job. I really like the poem. It was really well done. Keep up the great work. 5/5

Aww i loved it, it ws greatly written! dont say it ws poor! neways good work 5/5 jesxxx

It's a decently short poem, but you get a lot out of it for its short length!! It's a depressing poem, that makes total sense, and the words used describe it perfectly. 5/5

This is actually good, I like what I got from it and the flow is ok! the last 3 lines are my fav! but capitalize the I in I'll please

I think this poem is great 5/5
and keep up the good work
Leona