Its really good hun give it credit, you just need to make the stanza's the same length, but other wise your almost there hun keep it up=)

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Jenn:P

It doesn't suck!! its really extremely good! thanks for telling me that. :) you can pm whenever also. i always respond too. :) bye

love Lenee

Great completion joc i liked it

Oh cute...very nice...one of my fav...I love it...

I can really realte to what you wrote...i love it!-xxx-