Nice Haiku - I totally agree - The Flame of Faith will forever last the cover of eternity.

I'm not sure your intent of haze, but I take it more as a cover, than a myriad expression. Like a "Hazy" presence, one in which embellishes and covets.

Sort of like the idea that Satan would'nt want the "Words" of God to be manifest in the world.

So candidly, and in short - This Flame will outlast the haze which is eternity.

I'm probably wrong, but either way I enjoyed it.

Keep writing!

5/5

Bravo. :] Well done.

Krete, you\'re spot on! :p
Well done! :-)

Brillient made me think!!
aaron

Very nicely done. Haiku are especially difficult to pull off but you managed well.
BTW Haiku are traditionally used to describe nature hence the limited scope.