It's as though I am the one you are talking about...I can feel the pain...the cut...my blood flowing down...lol...seriously...this is good...really good

So sad:(
i basically already told u wat i thought but yeh i totally agree.
So hard to let go of someone ay?!
take care xoxo

I can relate...I cant say ive felt that exsact feeling...but i understand the pain of losing the one you love....Im here for you!!!

Much Love
Joclyn

I can really feel your pain man..to let go away someone from heart it's heard to do it.....yeah seriously...take care man..and good job
Jammal

Oh i'm so sorry. This was beautiful......in another way, but even more so than the other. If you ever need someone to talk to........i'm here. Take care of yourself = )
luv jess xoxo

Me again, you should think about entering a poem into some sort of contest, I have and I've one four different times and I've also had some published into books! Some have a word limit though so that could be a problem, but the length of them gives them all so much more emotion then most.

Awww...thats another good one but this time its sad...im sorry keep your head up and just keep writing that always helps me...good luck!!!

U HAVE A REAL TALENT AND I HOPE THAT YOU KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! I AM SO SORRY ABOUT YOUR GURL.... BUT NO MATTER HOW BAD THE OUTCOME IS THEIR IS ALWAYS SOME GOOD IN IT... SOMEWHERE... YOU JUST HAVE TO LOOK CLOSELY...IN YOUR CASE YOU PUBLISHED OR WROTE A NEW AND VERY EMOTIONAL POEM! WELL IM PRETTY SURE THEIR ARE LOTS OF OTHER GURLS OUT THERE...ACTUALLY I CAN COUNT ON IT JUST READ UR COMMENTS! WELL I HOPE U WRITE A NEW HIT! I'LL BE WAITING!

Wow. Your poems are absolutley AMAZING, especially this one..I love it.

X3 Grace