I loved it...Daniel...Ive never even heard of that kind of poetry thanx for introdusing me to it...Much Love....Joclyn

I like the subject you picked.

Obserations of season change is one of the sweetest soups to make.

Though I really am not sure if I like this Crapsey Cinquain itself. If maybe the cinquain could have been 24 syllables, and four syllables being the ending, then I would probably like it look to write in it myself.

Though I think that due to my own insecurities in rhyming, and sticking to a certain meter or syllable count, that this particular rhyming scheme just isnt for me.

Cute, at any rate.

5/5

Nice poem! I love it! Keep up the GREAT work!
~Sammy

Wow I love it.....this poem is so wow:) I don't know y? maybe because i love yellow leaves especially in autumn!
5/5 great job keep it up:)
pls Check my poems and tell me what you think:)